I personally think that everyone has a big lesson in their life. In my life, I’ve had big experience too. First of all I want to say I’m very luckiest girl
A many years ago, I remember that I was 6 years old. One night, suddenly my mom had had very important work. At that moment there was a no one to look after me. So my mom followed me with herself. After few days, my body started strong pain. I felt it and tried to tell someone. It was my teacher of kinder garden. She replied: “it was fine, you can be relaxed, don’t worry! So I forgot quickly that’s why I was little girl. But I still got sick more and more. My parents knew about it and took care for me all of the time. I was examined by all that good doctors. The most interesting thing was they told I hadn’t symptoms of illness and doctors was shocked by my health’s result as well as they thought so why was I still hurting?
My parents started losing their hope because I was hurting so much time by time, day by day. Fortunately my aunt found very popular monk to see me. He told it was “Guidel” which means monsters or witches. That’s why Mongolian people save their children from the monsters in the night. It called “Har halzan tuulai”. Suddenly my mom remembered that she had forgotten to save me from the monsters. Then monk saw and healed me quickly.
Now sometimes I think if there hadn’t that monk, I now live in is very doubtful whether. On the whole I understood from this situation is all things connected to each other so we should love our life and take care of yourselves! Life is short “All things are meaningful”.
God uses suffering as a whetstone to make men sharp with. Every person overcomes obstacles in their life. Some people learn from their problems but some people are upset and they can`t overcome. I had a big whetstone in my life. And I understood a lot of things from that whetstone. Now I want to write about it.
It happened when I was in the second class and the day was whitemoon`s eve. I lived in the countryside with my loved people who are my parents and a brother. My father was a chairman of Citizens' Representatives and mother was a history teacher. Also my brother studied the 3rd grade. We lived very happy. My family prepared to celebrate whitemoon and all things were ready. Also we bought many presents for people. Everyday my parents went to their job in the morning but my and my brother`s lesson started in the afternoon so they always locked us at home because we were too little to stay at home without any adult. Luckily that day my parents didn’t locked us because we wanted to play outside so my parents let us to play and didn’t lock the door. Then we went to the mountain to slide on a sledge. But suddenly we saw black smoke near our house in the sky. Then we heard that our house was burning. When we knew that we run as fast as we could to our home. Then I couldn’t believe in my eyes. My house was burning and many people were trying to put out the fire.
Then we hadn’t home to sleep and we stayed at my grandmother`s and celebrated whitemoon there. Also me and my brother hadn’t any clothes to wear so our cousins gave some clothes. And my father was very upset and didn’t eat anything. As well as he left his job. It was a very difficult for us. So sometimes my mother cried. A few days later we bought a new house and one day my mother said that “We are very lucky because we are all together, If that day we locked our children in the house what would happened? I can`t imagine that” and she kissed me and my brother.
All in all those things weren’t a problem for me. Instead of it sharpened me and help to understand a family is the most important thing for human life. I understood that money, houses and cars aren’t important in life. We can get those again. But real life existence happy family. If we lost one of the our family`s member we can never get him or her again. Three years since this time we have been living happy again. Now we have all everything we need things. I think I am the happiest and the richest girl in the world, because I having all members of the family alive. I`m really satisfied with my life and really proud of my parents specially my mother. I see that problems are really opportunities to learn about life. See the beauty of everything.
Honor your father and mother, so you may live long on the earth.( the Bible)
My mother was shouting somewhere. I couldn’t see her. I was trying to get up, trying to answer and help her but I still couldn’t do anything. Then I saw something- my mother was crying but she couldn’t say anything. It was so horrible, and I didn’t know what to do. In general I felt she was hurting terribly. Suddenly someone called me, “Sara, Sara are you ok?” Luckily it was horrible dream. When I woke up, I couldn’t move because I was shocked. My pajamas were all wet, I couldn’t go back to sleep that night because I was thinking a lot of things. If my mother hurts that bad, or leaves me alone on the earth, then what would I do? How could I manage?
In the morning I opened the Bible as usual and read it carefully. I read, “Obey your parents, you’ll live longer”. I cried terribly because I was thinking about my mom. I always made her angry, complained to her, and felt hurt. I remembered that if our relationship was fine, all my work would be done successfully, but when our relationship was broken, all my plans fell apart.
I went to my mom and said, “Mom, please accept my apology, I have hurt you a lot. I had a bad dream about you yesterday. Even though I can’t promise to hurt you more, I will try to be better. I love you.”
The Law of my life is honoring my parents. If they weren’t here in the world, I wouldn’t be here either. They are the best advisers to me as well as they always know what is good for me. ALWAYS HONOR YOUR PARENTS!!!
Laws of life Time never waits you When I was seven years old my father had illness of heart I didn’t know that illness name. And my father went to hospital I was really scared because I thought I was going to lose my father. My family and my uncles were panic. I didn’t know what to do all I could do was just cry. My mother and my brother were trying to console me. While I was crying I thought that I never told my father that I love you. I was really shamed on me because never told him I loved him so much. But luckily doctors saved my father’s life. My father was treated in hospital almost for a month. My family and I really missed him. When he came home I told him that I love you he was really happy and kissed on my cheek. Life is rich. No one knows about the future. Time never waits you, so if you love someone don’t waste the time call and say them that I love you. ELT 1B E.Oyun-Erdene
Law of my life Which is the cream of crop All throughout life people always ask one question “ Which is more important money or love”. No one can really answer the question be people always give there opinions. In this essay I will be giving information on both and providing my opinion on the well argued subject. First I will be telling you about love and what it is to me. Second I will be telling you about money and what it is to me. Third I will be telling you my opinion on whether I think love is more important than money.
What is love? It is one of the most difficult questions for the mankind. Centuries have passed by, relationships have bloomed and so has love. But no one can give the proper definition of love. To some love is friendship set on fire, for others maybe love is like luck. You have to go all the way to find it. No matter how you define it or feel it, love is the eternal truth in the history of mankind. Love is patient, love is kind, it has no envy, nor it boasts itself and it is never proud. It rejoices over the evil and is the truth seeker. Love protects, preserves, and hopes for the positive aspect of life. Always stand steadfast in love, not fall into it. It is like the dream of your matter of affection coming true. Love can occur between two or more individuals. It bonds them and connects them in a unified link of trust, intimacy and interdependence. It enhances the relationship and comforts the soul. Love should be experienced and not just felt. The depth of love cannot be measured. Look at the relationship between a mother and a child. The mother loves the child unconditionally and it cannot be measured at all. A different dimension can be attained between any relationships with the magic of love. Love can be created. You just need to focus on the goodness of the other person. If this can be done easily, then you can also love easily. What is money? If you have money you have everything. Money gives you honor, money gives you luxury life. May be gives you family but it is make you like evil .You will sick for greed of gold. If you have lot of you can buy any thing you want but not love. ELT 1B O.Bayartsetseg
A laws of my life “We can not see or touch in period only we can race with that” I have several law of until today. But the most important thing that I learn is time never gets back and we can not time reversal of our life. It’s just a little thought but it’s a very big worry and if your period time has been late or didn’t come at all you will know the kind of stress it can cause. Some people believe that period time arrive like clockwork. But it is impossible. Because under the theories of physics (specifically, relativity), if a person *could* travel faster than the speed of light, what they perceive as "time" would move backwards under certain circumstances. Let me tell you about why I compliance this law. It was just a day as usual. The sun shines and people rushed to everywhere. As for me, I want to my university early morning. Actually my mother used to always bring me to my university. However I had used to local transport for the first time since joining to the university. But then I had been stolen my lovely and useful cellphone in the public transportation. I was sorry that incident. Because there were too many memories of my childhood and friends. Also if my cellphone was then I could do my lesson faster than now.It is not all about my cellphone. Before I was lost my phone I though it is not important it is just phone but there have my all of memory. My school friends picture my families picture. When I was lost my phone I realize I lost my childhood. BE HAPPY FOR YOU HAVE . From this incident I learn “we have only one chance and if we found, we have to catch faster we can”. Time is as precious as gold. ELT 1B B.Bujinlkham
Laws of my life You should think about before do something... In this winter i washed my rooms window. You know, what? When it's -20C...of course, it was the bad idea ever. The window is broken. So i realized the result is very important. We have a lot of chance,so you should think about before do something. Another one story: One day my friend told me his problem. But unfortunately that time i was very busy. So i don't care him. He disappointed. He doesn't talk anymore, i lost him. So i realized it was all of my fault. If i little cares him, it never happens. ELT 1b E.Tuul
Since I was born I have lived with my parents for 18 years. I am the happiest one when I am with them there was nothing to worry about. But now I have grown up I had to leave my home my country my parents to study at university in UB. And my own life has started. First months were fine I got 15000 tugrugs every week from parents. But after then It was difficult to ask them for money cause the usage of money has increased there were many things to buy and to do. In my home country I didn’t know the value of money I spent much money on sweets and other unuseful things. I realized that I must not be as past. So I started to save money and not to buy any candies any juices any unnecessary things. But that wasn’t enough so I searched for part time job. I found many jobs such as spread advertisements,foods,oriflame but I looked for job that gives the salary each day.so I finally found job as spreading pizza advertisement. I walked for 6 hours spreading advertisements in every family in apartments. I was really happy when I got my first salary that was so tasty. I felt value of money. That was the biggest comment in my life
The next biggest lesson was about time management. I studied in 8th class. I studied English and german . I prepared for german exam that was really important to me and I was not bad at german. when exam day came I was not worried about anything I was sure that I could pass it. so the exam started I almost did everything but suddenly the examiner said that only 10 minutes left.i was shoked that I didn’t fill the answer paper. I was confused and didn’t fill correctly and didn’t finish them the examiner collected the papers I begged for them to give just 5 minutes but they resisted it. I didn’t want to cry but my tears started to drop. I didn’t want to believe that I fell in that exam. So from that day I knew what Is time management. In the end, humans are not perfect we can mistake but if we can get example from them and try to not to mistake again we are very close to the perfect. The lessons from my life are above and i will never forget it.i will pass it to others and give them chance.
Laws of my life Everyone have their own perspective and life to live and in the life every one have different experiences and learning.Some people are very wise thinking, positive thinking, doing positive things etc.. And they make their own laws for their life according their experience and live in that way. Some people are very causal they prefer flexible life according their struggle for life, they do sometimes do good and bad as well. Some are like, they only think of enjoyment and luxuries etc , so every one have their own experiences, perspective for their life according their life style and by the life they got. As same i have my own law and perspective for my life. I am very simple girl, I have also aim to be something in life like they other have, i have also lot of upside down experience in my life but they way( law ) my choice is never hurt or harm, anyone as much as possible. Life is so long, so every time in ever situation We think this is right and that is wrong, we should do this and do that,and every time we create new law for our life but according to me my law say's now just live life live life and experience it what ever it is good or bad, happy or sad, just try to be happy and give love to other and share smile to every one.In this way i just want to live life and experience what ever comes on my path. So i just want to thank you all my friend and family, for keeping me strong , giving me love care and taught me to live life in my own way. i am happy not because i have everything but i am happy because i choose to be smile by my experiences . 1B Yu.Badamsuren
Laws of life Laws of Life are short, pithy sayings or quotations that reveal the core values that make up a person’s character. Memorable and meaningful, these Laws of Life often serve as guideposts to a person journeying through life. What is your Law of Life? That is a challenging question. And that is exactly what young people are asked when they participate in the Laws of Life Essay Contest. There is no right answer or quick response. In order to succeed in this activity, contest participants need to reflect and write from the heart about what they think matters most in life. this means that every person one comes in contact with has an influence my life. One should never forget the people who go out of their way to be nice to them. Influences others have on my life are the most important details of my life. One influence on my life is people. It is my first love. I really loved him. First we met in downtown restaurant. He was honest , lovely, cute, hardworking. he related me before he helped everything me. We did everything together: watch cinema , play game, go to park etc But he died by ill. I regretted behind him those time. I cried many. His mom is really sadness. I knew when he didn’t die, I love better than before. Right now I remember his. If he were superior , I would have happy. But he wish I had a happy and all the best. Finally I will have thinking best all thing , trying for life for him.
Laws of life I believe the laws of life are different for everyone. They are different and unique for everyone and are reflected on how they have lived their life. The laws of life are the structure for a person’s personality and character. All that his purpose for your life, and all want to live a good life. To create a good life for us is very important to correctly define their goals. And a positive, hard working, energetic people that I understand that there are higher. The most important law of life is to respect others no matter what. Respected, loved others, I think it should be the most important human values.
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I couldn't believe the moment had finally arrived. I was in the plane to do skydiving.I was so putt off my instructor and we ready to jump. When i first jump out of the plane, i get that falling feeling for a brief moment, and after chute opens thing suddenly became quite and slow.
I can't explain what it's like to hear the door open for the first time and feel the wind entering the cabin. But the view was even less describable. After few minutes of taking in the breathtaking view, it's time to land. I felt like i'm in heaven. It was such a great experience for me. ELT-3B-E.Tuul
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ReplyDeleteI personally think that everyone has a big lesson in their life. In my life, I’ve had big experience too. First of all I want to say I’m very luckiest girl
A many years ago, I remember that I was 6 years old. One night, suddenly my mom had had very important work. At that moment there was a no one to look after me. So my mom followed me with herself. After few days, my body started strong pain. I felt it and tried to tell someone. It was my teacher of kinder garden. She replied: “it was fine, you can be relaxed, don’t worry! So I forgot quickly that’s why I was little girl. But I still got sick more and more. My parents knew about it and took care for me all of the time. I was examined by all that good doctors. The most interesting thing was they told I hadn’t symptoms of illness and doctors was shocked by my health’s result as well as they thought so why was I still hurting?
My parents started losing their hope because I was hurting so much time by time, day by day. Fortunately my aunt found very popular monk to see me. He told it was “Guidel” which means monsters or witches. That’s why Mongolian people save their children from the monsters in the night. It called “Har halzan tuulai”. Suddenly my mom remembered that she had forgotten to save me from the monsters. Then monk saw and healed me quickly.
Now sometimes I think if there hadn’t that monk, I now live in is very doubtful whether. On the whole I understood from this situation is all things connected to each other so we should love our life and take care of yourselves! Life is short “All things are meaningful”.
ELT 1B B.Dulguun
Delete85/ B. I liked your maxim ''All things are meaningful", which is very true.
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ReplyDeleteGod uses suffering as a whetstone to make men sharp with. Every person overcomes obstacles in their life. Some people learn from their problems but some people are upset and they can`t overcome. I had a big whetstone in my life. And I understood a lot of things from that whetstone. Now I want to write about it.
It happened when I was in the second class and the day was whitemoon`s eve. I lived in the countryside with my loved people who are my parents and a brother. My father was a chairman of Citizens' Representatives and mother was a history teacher. Also my brother studied the 3rd grade. We lived very happy. My family prepared to celebrate whitemoon and all things were ready. Also we bought many presents for people. Everyday my parents went to their job in the morning but my and my brother`s lesson started in the afternoon so they always locked us at home because we were too little to stay at home without any adult. Luckily that day my parents didn’t locked us because we wanted to play outside so my parents let us to play and didn’t lock the door. Then we went to the mountain to slide on a sledge. But suddenly we saw black smoke near our house in the sky. Then we heard that our house was burning. When we knew that we run as fast as we could to our home. Then I couldn’t believe in my eyes. My house was burning and many people were trying to put out the fire.
Then we hadn’t home to sleep and we stayed at my grandmother`s and celebrated whitemoon there. Also me and my brother hadn’t any clothes to wear so our cousins gave some clothes. And my father was very upset and didn’t eat anything. As well as he left his job. It was a very difficult for us. So sometimes my mother cried. A few days later we bought a new house and one day my mother said that “We are very lucky because we are all together, If that day we locked our children in the house what would happened? I can`t imagine that” and she kissed me and my brother.
All in all those things weren’t a problem for me. Instead of it sharpened me and help to understand a family is the most important thing for human life. I understood that money, houses and cars aren’t important in life. We can get those again. But real life existence happy family. If we lost one of the our family`s member we can never get him or her again. Three years since this time we have been living happy again. Now we have all everything we need things. I think I am the happiest and the richest girl in the world, because I having all members of the family alive. I`m really satisfied with my life and really proud of my parents specially my mother. I see that problems are really opportunities to learn about life. See the beauty of everything.
(95/ A. ) Interesting maxim. I really liked your essay. Both you and your brother had good luck on that day. Thank your parents and the heaven!
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My mother was shouting somewhere. I couldn’t see her. I was trying to get up, trying to answer and help her but I still couldn’t do anything. Then I saw something- my mother was crying but she couldn’t say anything. It was so horrible, and I didn’t know what to do. In general I felt she was hurting terribly. Suddenly someone called me, “Sara, Sara are you ok?” Luckily it was horrible dream. When I woke up, I couldn’t move because I was shocked. My pajamas were all wet, I couldn’t go back to sleep that night because I was thinking a lot of things. If my mother hurts that bad, or leaves me alone on the earth, then what would I do? How could I manage?
In the morning I opened the Bible as usual and read it carefully. I read, “Obey your parents, you’ll live longer”. I cried terribly because I was thinking about my mom. I always made her angry, complained to her, and felt hurt. I remembered that if our relationship was fine, all my work would be done successfully, but when our relationship was broken, all my plans fell apart.
I went to my mom and said, “Mom, please accept my apology, I have hurt you a lot. I had a bad dream about you yesterday. Even though I can’t promise to hurt you more, I will try to be better. I love you.”
The Law of my life is honoring my parents. If they weren’t here in the world, I wouldn’t be here either. They are the best advisers to me as well as they always know what is good for me. ALWAYS HONOR YOUR PARENTS!!!
ELT 1B student E.Sara
Nicely written! 90/A
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When I was seven years old my father had illness of heart I didn’t know that illness name. And my father went to hospital I was really scared because I thought I was going to lose my father. My family and my uncles were panic. I didn’t know what to do all I could do was just cry. My mother and my brother were trying to console me. While I was crying I thought that I never told my father that I love you. I was really shamed on me because never told him I loved him so much. But luckily doctors saved my father’s life. My father was treated in hospital almost for a month. My family and I really missed him. When he came home I told him that I love you he was really happy and kissed on my cheek. Life is rich. No one knows about the future. Time never waits you, so if you love someone don’t waste the time call and say them that I love you.
ELT 1B E.Oyun-Erdene
I agree with your point time never waits. So spend your time in fruitful ways for you. 85/B
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All throughout life people always ask one question “ Which is more important money or love”. No one can really answer the question be people always give there opinions. In this essay I will be giving information on both and providing my opinion on the well argued subject. First I will be telling you about love and what it is to me. Second I will be telling you about money and what it is to me. Third I will be telling you my opinion on whether I think love is more important than money.
What is love? It is one of the most difficult questions for the mankind. Centuries have passed by, relationships have bloomed and so has love. But no one can give the proper definition of love. To some love is friendship set on fire, for others maybe love is like luck. You have to go all the way to find it. No matter how you define it or feel it, love is the eternal truth in the history of mankind. Love is patient, love is kind, it has no envy, nor it boasts itself and it is never proud. It rejoices over the evil and is the truth seeker. Love protects, preserves, and hopes for the positive aspect of life. Always stand steadfast in love, not fall into it. It is like the dream of your matter of affection coming true. Love can occur between two or more individuals. It bonds them and connects them in a unified link of trust, intimacy and interdependence. It enhances the relationship and comforts the soul. Love should be experienced and not just felt. The depth of love cannot be measured. Look at the relationship between a mother and a child. The mother loves the child unconditionally and it cannot be measured at all. A different dimension can be attained between any relationships with the magic of love. Love can be created. You just need to focus on the goodness of the other person. If this can be done easily, then you can also love easily.
What is money? If you have money you have everything. Money gives you honor, money gives you luxury life. May be gives you family but it is make you like evil .You will sick for greed of gold. If you have lot of you can buy any thing you want but not love.
ELT 1B O.Bayartsetseg
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ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you cherish love than money. But some of the sentences in your essay is not yours, I feel. 75/B
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I have several law of until today. But the most important thing that I learn is time never gets back and we can not time reversal of our life. It’s just a little thought but it’s a very big worry and if your period time has been late or didn’t come at all you will know the kind of stress it can cause.
Some people believe that period time arrive like clockwork. But it is impossible. Because under the theories of physics (specifically, relativity), if a person *could* travel faster than the speed of light, what they perceive as "time" would move backwards under certain circumstances.
Let me tell you about why I compliance this law.
It was just a day as usual. The sun shines and people rushed to everywhere. As for me, I want to my university early morning. Actually my mother used to always bring me to my university. However I had used to local transport for the first time since joining to the university. But then I had been stolen my lovely and useful cellphone in the public transportation. I was sorry that incident. Because there were too many memories of my childhood and friends. Also if my cellphone was then I could do my lesson faster than now.It is not all about my cellphone. Before I was lost my phone I though it is not important it is just phone but there have my all of memory. My school friends picture my families picture. When I was lost my phone I realize I lost my childhood.
BE HAPPY FOR YOU HAVE . From this incident I learn “we have only one chance and if we found, we have to catch faster we can”.
Time is as precious as gold.
ELT 1B B.Bujinlkham
I do agree with you regarding the precious time. So don't waste it. 84/B
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In this winter i washed my rooms window. You know, what?
When it's -20C...of course, it was the bad idea ever. The window is broken. So i realized the result is very important. We have a lot of chance,so you should think about before do something.
Another one story:
One day my friend told me his problem. But unfortunately that time i was very busy. So i don't care him. He disappointed. He doesn't talk anymore, i lost him. So i realized it was all of my fault. If i little cares him, it never happens.
ELT 1b E.Tuul
80/B. Think well before taking measures. Nicely said.
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ReplyDeleteSince I was born I have lived with my parents for 18 years. I am the happiest one when I am with them there was nothing to worry about. But now I have grown up I had to leave my home my country my parents to study at university in UB. And my own life has started.
First months were fine I got 15000 tugrugs every week from parents. But after then It was difficult to ask them for money cause the usage of money has increased there were many things to buy and to do. In my home country I didn’t know the value of money I spent much money on sweets and other unuseful things. I realized that I must not be as past. So I started to save money and not to buy any candies any juices any unnecessary things. But that wasn’t enough so I searched for part time job. I found many jobs such as spread advertisements,foods,oriflame but I looked for job that gives the salary each day.so I finally found job as spreading pizza advertisement. I walked for 6 hours spreading advertisements in every family in apartments. I was really happy when I got my first salary that was so tasty.
I felt value of money. That was the biggest comment in my life
The next biggest lesson was about time management. I studied in 8th class. I studied English and german . I prepared for german exam that was really important to me and I was not bad at german. when exam day came I was not worried about anything I was sure that I could pass it. so the exam started I almost did everything but suddenly the examiner said that only 10 minutes left.i was shoked that I didn’t fill the answer paper. I was confused and didn’t fill correctly and didn’t finish them the examiner collected the papers I begged for them to give just 5 minutes but they resisted it. I didn’t want to cry but my tears started to drop. I didn’t want to believe that I fell in that exam. So from that day I knew what Is time management.
In the end, humans are not perfect we can mistake but if we can get example from them and try to not to mistake again we are very close to the perfect. The lessons from my life are above and i will never forget it.i will pass it to others and give them chance.
N.Nomin-Erdene
I really enjoyed reading what you wrote.Keep it up! 90/A
DeleteLaws of my life
ReplyDeleteEveryone have their own perspective and life to live and in the life every one have different experiences and learning.Some people are very wise thinking, positive thinking, doing positive things etc.. And they make their own laws for their life according their experience and live in that way. Some people are very causal they prefer flexible life according their struggle for life, they do sometimes do good
and bad as well. Some are like, they only think of enjoyment and luxuries etc , so every one have their own experiences, perspective for their life according their life style and by the life they got. As same i have my own law and perspective for my life.
I am very simple girl, I have also aim to be something in life like they other have, i have also lot of upside down experience in my life
but they way( law ) my choice is never hurt or harm, anyone as much as possible. Life is so long, so every time in ever situation
We think this is right and that is wrong, we should do this and do that,and every time we create new law for our life but according to me my law say's now just live life live
life and experience it what ever it is good or bad, happy or sad, just try to be happy and give love to other and share smile to every one.In this way i just want to live life and experience what ever comes on my path.
So i just want to thank you all my friend and family, for keeping me strong , giving me love care and taught me to live life in my own way.
i am happy not because i have everything but i am happy because i choose to be smile by my experiences .
1B Yu.Badamsuren
Sorry for late my essay's meaning is like Dulguun's essay. So i wrote another again.
DeleteSimple but nicely written. 90/A
DeleteLaws of life
ReplyDeleteLaws of Life are short, pithy sayings or quotations that reveal the core values that make up a person’s character. Memorable and meaningful, these Laws of Life often serve as guideposts to a person journeying through life.
What is your Law of Life? That is a challenging question. And that is exactly what young people are asked when they participate in the Laws of Life Essay Contest. There is no right answer or quick response. In order to succeed in this activity, contest participants need to reflect and write from the heart about what they think matters most in life.
this means that every person one comes in contact with has an influence my life. One should never forget the people who go out of their way to be nice to them.
Influences others have on my life are the most important details of my life. One influence on my life is people. It is my first love. I really loved him. First we met in downtown restaurant. He was honest , lovely, cute, hardworking. he related me before he helped everything me. We did everything together: watch cinema , play game, go to park etc
But he died by ill. I regretted behind him those time. I cried many. His mom is really sadness. I knew when he didn’t die, I love better than before.
Right now I remember his. If he were superior , I would have happy. But he wish I had a happy and all the best.
Finally I will have thinking best all thing , trying for life for him.
1b delgertsetseg
I understand you went through this hardship. But I'm glad that you over came it and realized that. 85/B
DeleteLaws of life
ReplyDeleteI believe the laws of life are different for everyone. They are different and unique for everyone and are reflected on how they have lived their life. The laws of life are the structure for a person’s personality and character. All that his purpose for your life, and all want to live a good life. To create a good life for us is very important to correctly define their goals. And a positive, hard working, energetic people that I understand that there are higher. The most important law of life is to respect others no matter what. Respected, loved others, I think it should be the most important human values.
82/B. To be frank, I expected more from you. But you kept short in your writing.
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ReplyDeleteI couldn't believe the moment had finally arrived...
ReplyDeleteI couldn't believe the moment had finally arrived. I was in the plane to do skydiving.I was so putt off my instructor and we ready to jump. When i first jump out of the plane, i get that falling feeling for a brief moment, and after chute opens thing suddenly became quite and slow.
I can't explain what it's like to hear the door open for the first time and feel the wind entering the cabin. But the view was even less describable. After few minutes of taking in the breathtaking view, it's time to land. I felt like i'm in heaven. It was such a great experience for me.
ELT-3B-E.Tuul