English Speaking and Writing Course 3a

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This is the first writing assignment due to Monday 24/II. Post on your pros and cons essay on topic "Mobiles in our life". Plz comment on each others composition.

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  1. laws of my life
    Of course, laws of my life is not constitution but very simple understanding. it is my principles and purposes of my life. About me, the first form of my about life is education.
    Since i was a secondary school pupil until now my the most important thing is studying. And in the future, after two or three years it will become a lobor. When I was at primary school, i was littleness carefree pupil. Once i was in second grade my mother told me that; '" If you study well Santa Clause looks bad pupils with paper binocular and calls their names in front of a lot of people. i was afraid of this word and decide to study hard. However that word which my mother said to me was very awful, i`m glad of her word until now and don`t forget it.
    I think the most important thing is education for young people. If you want to live happy and satisfy in your future life you have to acquire very well education. We have a lot of things to study.

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    1. 75/B Work hard in order to become well-educated.

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  2. My laws o f life

    I have found that being honest is the technique I can use. Rigth up front tell people what you are trying to aacomplish and that you are willing to sacrifice to accomplish. Lee Lacocca

    I want to introduce to you my life. First of all my childhood was really fun. I used to play gane all day, I used to think nothing whatever about life. When I was seventeenth years old I webt to on blind date. Then I loved on young. That young was my first love. Althougt we loved each other. Now We are studying at University.

    Maybe everybody imagines his or her future nicely and wants to live happily in it. I like to dream and imagine my future.But I hope that in the future I will be a good wife good mother and even a good teacher. My laws of me life will depend on this. In order to have good education. I must study hard.

    Maybe after master course . I will teach at University an institue or college. Secondly I can organize my own private life.

    Sometimes I imagine my future life in a big house surrounded by forest and greenery with loving children grown up and mt husband helping me with the household chore.

    It is my laws of life...

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    1. I wish you achieve what you dream about. Good luck! 90/A

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  3. Low of my life

    I have created an amazing life by studying at school and I will continue to create bigger and better things to make the right choices in life.
    I need to experience solitude, which most people are afraid of because in the silence you hear the truth and realize the solution.
    I used to have a tendency to wake up grumpy I resolved that by telling myself every night before I go to bed that I will wake up refreshed and energetic. It sounds silly as hell I know but it works.
    First thing I do to raise my energy? Is meditate a minimum of 15 minutes, 30 is more preferable start with 15 and work your way up.
    Also every thought you think comes with its own energy. Some are thoughts feel great some feel good and some suck. Our brains are problem solvers they are here to help us perceive the life we are living. It there is anything it can’t do or solve? It will create something.
    Every thought you have gives you the opportunity a choice to make. You can choose to follow that thought or choose to pick another thought that feels better.
    Too often we wait for circumstances to change for the better before we decide to feel better but if we had decided to feel better first the circumstances would have already changed so right now, go to do something that makes you happy. Do something that makes you smile laugh and feel good.
    Go right now.

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  5. Laws of my Life

    Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or present are certain to miss the future. / John F. Kennedy/

    I study Mongolian State University of Education ( MSUE) third course .I wanted to move forward with my life. In order to do this, I had to let go of bad memories. The bad memories that I thought I would live with for the rest of my life, I helped to realize that holding on to them was blocking my future. I am honest and responsible. Honest and responsible person is never difficult obstacles. Honest and responsible person, God never punished. Do not tell lies, steal the first requirement. It sounds easy, but also need to be careful.
    My mother, this woman of brave and intelligence who I admired, I will become mother kind of my mum. She is always my best associate and I never meet someone as her .I tried to help but I can’t achieve ideally. It didn’t click in my mind that I couldn’t do anything to save her from herself. Maybe laws of my life help me. ..
    I must meet with success Because my mum and dad believe to me . I have to sleep a little time and spend more something and study a long time. It also takes determination to make my dream come true. Be strong with my dream and something will come out of it. It might not come all out at once, but when life goes on the more and more i try to make my dream, the more and more my dream will be made.

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    1. Good. I wish you to make your dreams com true. 80/B

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  6. My laws of life

    A Good name is better than riches. This is a very good sentence. Every person wants to be a good one. In my opinion life is a test given to you which is about how you spend the period of time, what do you do in that specific time, who will you be, how to communicate with others.

    To begin with most important thing is you live very happiness and successfully. because of this, i want to be a good teacher and to make a happy my parents. Many adults tapped to others. For instance, use a smoke, alchocolic and every day go to the disco. that's very bad behavior. So i never do that bad things. However, people really want to be a happy life,but sometimes we have a some mistake. In addition, we must learn a lot of things from our mistake. Every person have a mistake. Last year, I have a big mistake, but I really learned a lot of things from my mistake. I know how difficult life. Now I never do that mistake again.

    In conclusion, а good beginning makes a good ending. how I try to hard, I have a happy, healthy life. I hope that my dream is come true

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    1. You found very nice maxim: Good beginning leads to good ending. So be optimistic. 84/B

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  7. Laws of my Life
    All people have their own laws and laws of life are different for everyone. It shows that who they are and try to follow until they die. For me, I have three basic laws that I always follow them in my every day life. The most important law is to respect for my parents and other people. Respecting others mean to behave well towards elders and young people. My second law is that to be on time. I always try to do things on time whatever I do. My parents have taught me that "Always be on time, If you meet someone, you must be there on time even though people are not be there. I think being on time is the most important character that must be on you. Finally, my third law of life is to be patient. If someone angry with me, I try to be patient though it is not my fault. It helps me do not do sin.
    That laws help me to be a good women in my future life. I always keep it in my mind and try to follow them.

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    1. Well, follow your laws of life what ever happens. 90/A

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  8. Laws of my Life
    All people have their own laws and laws of life are different for everyone. It shows that who they are and try to follow until they die. For me, I have three basic laws that I always follow them in my every day life.

    To begin with the most important law is to respect for my parents and other people. Respecting others mean to behave well towards elders and young people. My second law is that to be on time. I always try to do things on time whatever I do. My parents have taught me that "Always be on time, If you meet someone, you must be there on time even though people are not be there. I think being on time is the most important character that must be on you. Finally, my third law of life is to be patient. If someone angry with me, I try to be patient though it is not my fault. It helps me do not do sin.
    Sum up with that laws help me to be a good women in my future life. I always keep it in my mind and try to follow them.

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    1. i agree with your third law, that is very important

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  9. "A man must be big enough to admit his mistakes, smart enough to profit from them, and strong enough to correct them" John C.Maxwell. That is one of the smartest quotes which I like a lot.
    I am from an ordinary family but we are rich in happiness. I think family is a teacher for your life. You learn many thing such as respect others. Family helps you to be a good breeding man.The true thing is everyone makes mistakes. It doesn't matter, but it is important that how you learn from your mistakes.
    When I was at 6th grade, I started learning English language. I was good at grammar and I had opportunities to participate in olympiads. But I couldn't because of my shyness. Then few years later I heard about a big olympiad was going to run. A lot of people such as my mother, my teacher and also my classmates encouraged me and suggested me to participate in. I took third place in that olympiad. I and my family were so happy to this but my teacher was not. She told me that I had had a big chance to give a gold medal. Firstly I was insulted but then I understood that my fault was an incaution. In the next olympiad I took first place. That showed me the more you try, the more you up.
    If you stumble on stone today, never stumble it again tomorrow. That is my life's law.

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    1. I got fourth place that time, got less 2 points than you got when we were in Erdenet. I am proud of you! Good luck for your further study!

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    2. good idea. if we try more i think we will reach our purpose

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    3. Nicely written. Keep up! 90/A

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    4. yep Tsatsaa good luck you too, :) thank you Muldir ;)

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  10. my law of life
    I came into this world on june. 07, 1993. The nurses said I was perfect; five fingers on each hand, two feet, and a
    healthy heart beating with excitement. maybe only that day i gave happiness for my mom.
    i always said to me: ''To abide, believe, wait so you will be winner.''
    I have a dream. i want to found happiness. if i study hard, i will catch my dream.
    first, if i healthy, i can create nice future. and feel
    Then i haven't got a father. he prefer to choose a rich women. I always hate him. so my mother is a wonderful women. she patient clever, beautiful etc. she is my live idol. how to fence-sitting, temperance, repartee from her. i need a education especially capacity for profession. If so i can earn money. BECAUSE money is very strong item. life show me it. all of people prefer money.
    Finally, more than, i have to learn how to be good mother , wife and daughter. every people will be mother or father. It is natural law. Topmost, you will be a parent in future If so you have to be honest, clever, patient and healthy.

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    1. Being a human and being loved and respected by others is what you need to value in your life. 80/B

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  11. Laws of Life
    If you ever see me in a fighting with a grisly bear, prey for the bear NOT FOR ME... I've always loved that quote. Because i often face to life troubles such as when i lose my fellowmen, when i fail, even when i am studying. Not only i came across with these troubles but also everyone do. That is why i always encourage myself by this quote and try to be brave in front of life difficulties. I guess that if the person who doesn't give up, reaches the success. So first law of my life is never give up.
    My mother often tells me that " Don't do bad things because A bad beginning makes a bad end ". Therefore second law of my life is to be a warm heart. The more i help somebody the better i can back.
    Finally i would like to say that if person who can follow their laws of life, they can create big life and can satisfy their life

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    1. some ideas are same my essay that's great
      we think same direction : )

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    2. I do appreciate your warm heart towards the life. Keep up the way you think. 85/B

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  13. LAWS OF MY LIFE
    There are only two ways to live your life, only two ways to be. One is the right way, the other the wrong way. The right is to give, to share, to love. The wrong way is to snatch, to exploit, to accumulate. Love and money are the symbols of these two ways. Money is neurosis, love is ecstasy. Love is the right way and money is the wrong way. I really agreed with it.
    10 years ago our family moved to UB. At that time our family wasn’t good. We don’t have money, we don’t have any friends. I was only 10 years old whereas I was understanding all of difficulties of my parents. So i understood only money make our life. Then when my mother come from her work, I gave her all of my property. However it was only one thousand tugrugs but I collected it my whole life. My mother didn’t take it and told me: “money can’t make happy life, only love can change our life, we should love each other. If she didn’t say these words,it would be possible that I can do everything for money. Maybe wrong way would expect me. Since this time my laws of life became love and to love. Now we are living together happily. i will always love my parents, sisters, husband, friends and of course my daughter who is treasure of my life.
    Let ‘s love each other. Love can change whole world.
    3a Dawaanyam

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    1. i really like your thought money not change our life

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    2. Love has great power to unite everything! I fully agree with you

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    3. Beautifully said about life philosophy. 85/B

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  14. “You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.”
    ― Mae West
    This quotes motivated and help me set laws of my life. In life we need to set goals. My first goal it is to get a good job that suits my qualifications and start my professional career, have enough money to buy everything I want and have good friends that I can count on. At the end of my life, to be able to look back on my life as meaningful and complete.
    Well I have a lot of people that inspire me but, the people that I admire the most are my parents because of their care and love me. I love them too. I have tons of reasons for why mom inspires me. First of all she’s the one that gave me life. I think she is the only one that understands me when I get angry or sad I can talk to her about anything and she would never even judge me. And my dad always encourages me and persuades me to never give up and when ever I needed something my dad would always be there for me to get it or to help me do something. Both my parents have done lots of things to help me become a better person. My parents always teach me to be honest, punctual, gentle, polite and dedicated. They have taught me invaluable lessons about work, marriage, parenting, relationships and life. My parents worked very hard to give me everything I want and I really appreciated for it. I hope one day I can be, as great as they are.
    I look back and see how lucky I am. I know have a family that loves me which some people don’t have. I’m lucky to have a lot of chance to realize my goals which is configured by my parents. I’m only child so I have to work hard in order to my parents. I will do anything for their happiness. This is the law of my life.
    3A M.Bolor-erdene

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    1. I liked it. I proud of your parents..love them much as you can..

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    2. I appreciate your parents are dedicating. Good luck for your future happy life

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    3. Amazing maxim you've found that will lead your whole life. 90/A

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  15. Hopefully, everyone has laws of their life. For me, i have two basic laws of my life. The first important law is having an education . My parents always tell us Whoever can't buy your education but also you can buy all necessarry things by your education.You know that education is the most powerful tool in the world. For example in my family.I have two brothers and sister. My oldest brother is a architecter, my sister is a teacher, my brother is a doctor. They show me what is the advantage of having an education. Also i always try to learn their experience. Having an education will allow you a better chance of getting a job that pays a above simple way. The second law is learning by mistake. I believe that if we make a mistake , take the and learn and positive. For instance, when i was the secondary school, participated history olympaid .There were two stages. The first stage wrote essay on mongolian history. Ten the best students chosen. The stage gave a lecture. My lecture name was KHelmegdel. it was time to read the lecture. I tried to the best. all judgements said that my lecture was good contant but one judgement asked me one question about it. Unfortunately, i didn't answer right. But my teacher prepared most, i just read also i never asked about it. Finally i understood if you really win competitions, you research on all side it and try to do yourself. This bad experi
    nce also gave me more strength and helped also made me better equipped to deal with future life. We usually think the negative thougths about our mistake but need to understand and accept that the mistake we will bring huge experience, changes. 3a B.Otgonjargal

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    1. I'm glad that you're learning from your mistakes. 90/A

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  16. I think same thing about education..i LIKED IT.Good luck!

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  17. Laws of my life

    Everyone else in this world has its own laws of life. Thus, even my life have got a number of laws. They are:
    Firstly, the father , mother , brother , sister actuator return .
    Secondly, to become society staff of the need to possess excellent English language. My knowledge of english language is so bad. Because I did not study in English language at secondary school . Russian language should be six years, and be like it, I learnt Russian language excellent therefore I learn teacher of english language at now. Good decent life can not learn English as well in possession as laws of my life.
    Thirdly, to increase the size of interest be a good mother , daughter , and live happier .
    Finally, nobody would respect and support and love of the family to feel welcome to regret later that only time will tell , but let everyone want to be a law of life . I actually felt a thing hitherto regrets because other people like me do not regrets .
    There are laws of my life.

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    1. Keep writing. It improves your writing skill. 75/B

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  18. LAWS OF MY LIFE
    You are the only one person between the 6,5 billion people. There is no version of you.So you have to love yourself. Loving yourself is not boost yourself. Of course, everyone loves themselves, but some people think that if i were more prettier and more beautiful, like singers, actors and other people. The main thing that i want to say is never unsatisfy about your appearance. Be confident about your appearance.
    I remember the word that my mother said to me the girl of her friend says to her mother that why didn't you born me so pretty. And her mother said to her you have to thank to me that i didn't born you naturally disabled. After i heard it I always thank to my mother. Some girls want to operate plastic surgery. They don't know the affect of it. They only living by today. but you have to live for future, and to live well in future.
    Finally this essay is all about having a delf esteem and satisfaction of your life and appearance. This is law of my life.
    АХБ 3А Ж.МӨНХТУУЛ

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  19. It was interesting to know what are your laws of life: self-esteem and satisfaction which each person should have. 85/B

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